Research into Audience: Animatic Feedback

Lucy and I presented our animatic to a small group of friends to receive feedback, on things that needed to be improved for the finished video. Some points are listed below, and how we intend on dealing with them.

Feedback 1: Your voiceover isn't very clear, how can you improve this for the final video?
Lucy: This voiceover was only for the animatic, we are in the process of recording a second one, containing much more detail about the storyline as it is much clearer.

Feedback 2: How do your costumes fit in with the Romantic Comedy genre?
Amy: After researching typical romantic comedy films, we realised that we needed to choose outfits which portrayed the stereotypical girl, although most romantic comedies we used as our influential films are American, the style differs, so we just thought of outfits that would related to out target audience!

Feedback 3: You haven't added any titles into this animatic, are you going to upload one with titles?
Lucy: Yes, although our first animatic has no titles, we are currently adding titles and are going to re-upload

 

Group Roles:

Lucy: I showed the animatic to our friends, and then noted down any comments they gave us, and answering any queries I could.
Amy: I typed up the comments, whilst answering any queries along with Lucy, and posted it to the blog.