In this post you will find a second draft of the pitch. The pitch was re-created once we received feedback from the class. This is so we can use this for any planning, as sort of a basis around our film.
Group Roles:
Amy Tilley: I went through the video of the feedback and noted any changes we could use to improve our video. Once Lucy had finished making the changes, I formatted it into a JPEG so it could be uploaded, and the uploaded it to our blog. I had to make a few major changes to our pitch, due to some of our actors not being available to film, and therefore needed to get new actors.
Lucy Gladdish: Using the notes amy made I added any improvements to our original Pitch. Necessary changes and developments have been made, and our pitch has been improved.
Can you make the pitch bigger please, so that it can be read.
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